"Kelly,
Your dialogue, though brief, is intense and moving, with a interesting
surprise at the end. One small mechanical flaw: the spelling is hors d'oeuvres.
Grade: 100"
Yeah well, so I can't spell. I looked the damn thing up, too! But hurrah! I don't have to do a final project, the Kelly snagged an A in creative writing.
Woo!
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